Is there a quick and easy way to improve your IELTS Writing Score?
Well, it might not happen overnight, but there are certainly a few things that could make a difference.
Do you do all of these?
Task 1 - the Academic Writing Test
1. Paraphrase the introduction
Don’t try to change every word in the introduction – that makes it sound unnatural. Use simple synonyms (e.g. the chart shows = illustrates) as well as more complex structures (e.g. change nouns into verbs: the production of oil/how much oil was produced).
You can often group countries into regions e.g. in Italy, France, Spain, Poland and Germany = in 5 European countries or use the adjective form e.g. a university in the UK = a British University.
And try to vary the way you describe the time period e.g. from 1995 to 2015/ between 1995 and 2015/ over a 10-year period/ over two decades.
2. Write a clear overview
Don’t confuse the overview with the introduction. An overview is absolutely crucial for a minimum score of 6 in Task Achievement. It can be very general and does not need to include data/numbers/figures.
Try to see the ‘big picture’ (but don’t be afraid to say that there was no significant change, or no significant differences, or ‘no correlation between…’ if that is the big picture).
Start your overview with ‘Overall….’ so that the examiner can see you’ve written an overview!
3. Analyze the information and don’t give your opinion
Do NOT give any opinion about why you think something happened – this will lose points in Task Achievement because it is considered to be subjective rather than objective
e.g. if you notice that sales fell dramatically in 2008, DON’T say ‘this was probably due to the global financial crisis’. Just report the facts.
4. Analyze graphs vertically and horizontally
Many graphs show changes over time, so you look at them horizontally (e.g. sales increased/decreased over a 10-year period).
But you also need to compare who had the highest/lowest sales over the period – this is comparing vertically.
Draw on the graph to help you see these key features.
5. Avoid giving too much ‘mechanical detail’
Don’t describe every detail e.g. ‘It went up in 1982, then it went down in 1985, then it went up again in 1990 and then it fell again in 1995’.
There is no point describing everything that you see – the examiners can see this information for themselves, so why do they need you to describe it for them? It also makes your writing very boring and not ‘analytical’.
6. Don’t describe, analyse
Try to find quick ways of ANALYSING the numbers.
Look for numbers that halved, doubled, tripled, etc.
Look for places where you can show complex analysis – e.g. there were four times as many visitors in 2005 as there were in 2000/ tourist numbers increased fourfold’.
Add some extra data if necessary e.g. with 2 million people visiting the town.
7. Write enough words
Don’t be afraid to go OVER the word count.
In Task 1, some words from the paper are not included in the word count, so make sure you are well over the limit.
Practise this at home so that you don’t waste time counting words in the exam.
Task 1 - General Training Letters
- Answer all the bullet points
- Use the correct form of greeting
- Use the correct tone and register throughout
Get more details on General Training Letters.
Task 2 Essays: Academic and GT
8. Write a General Statement
Get your first line right. You need a sentence that tells the reader something about the issue and why it’s important. The following three starting points work for most situations:
- a comparison with the past (e.g. ‘In the past, children used to play outside’)
- a recent development (‘Recent research has shown that childhood obesity is on the rise’)
- a general opinion (‘Many people believe that children spend too much time on the computer’).
You can then lead in to your answer
- ‘but nowadays there is a tendency for children to spend their free time on the computer’.
- ‘However, there are several measures that can be taken to reverse this trend’.
- ‘Others argue that computer skills are essential for the future’.
9. Make your opinion clear throughout
Don’t wait until the conclusion to give your opinion – for a higher score, your opinion needs to be clear throughout the essay, so why not say it in the introduction?
10. Answer the question
You already know this. The main reason why people do not get the score they were expecting is because they didn’t answer the question.
Write a plan and make sure every point in the plan answers the question. Stick to the plan.
11. Don’t use whole sentences of memorised language
It’s good to learn short phrases and collocations (words that go together like ‘a worrying trend’) that you can use in many situations, but don’t use whole sentences that look impressive but say nothing – ‘In this essay I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages and then give my own opinion’ – er, yes, that’s what the question asks you to do! Thanks for that!
12. Use a wide range of vocabulary
In my opinion this is what usually holds people back from a higher score. It is difficult to demonstrate ‘flexibility and precision’ and use ‘less common items’ when you are under pressure.
This is where preparation is crucial. You need the right words at your fingertips.
This takes time, effort and motivation. You have to read widely and keep vocabulary lists for each topic.
13. Use clear paragraphs
This is a simple fix.
If you don’t use paragraphs you will stay at a 5 for Coherence and Cohesion.
Don’t overuse linking words either. Although they are important, they can be annoying. In addition, they’re not always used correctly. Besides there are many other ways of linking sentences. Moreover it makes your writing sound unnatural (do you see what I’m saying?).
14. Get feedback
If you think you’re doing all of the above but still not getting the score you need, is there anyone you can ask for feedback?
In the Members Academy you will get feedback on your writing every week so you can work on specific areas that you need to improve.
The Academy also includes a 28-Day Writing course for both General Training and Advanced Writing.
It consists of:
- 29 days of videos and worksheets (Task 1 and Task 2 Essentials and Advanced) to help you see what the examiners are looking for.
- 29 days of essential vocabulary-boosting lessons
- Feedback videos so you can see where students have made changes that got them a higher score
- Weekly live lessons based on samples that members submit
- A Bank of 60 Model Task 2 and 30 GT Task 1 essays
- Access to me when you need help.
Need more help?
Read more about Task 2 structures here.
How can I make my writing more complex?
Task 2 structures that strengthen your argument.
Find more examples and advice about IELTS Writing here.
Hi Fiona!
Hope you are doing great with IELTS Lessons.
I have been through your website and found excellent resources for IELTS each band.
I am writing here to get some suggestions/correction/feedback from you regarding my IELTS writing Task 1 and Task 2 as well as IELTS Speaking.
My IELTS examination(Academic IELTS) will be held on 19 June 2021,
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you!
Mamun
Hi Mamun
Many thanks for your message. Are you looking for personalised suggestions/correction/feedback on your own Writing?
Best wishes
Fiona
Really helpful, thanks for sharing ^^
Thank you Efix.
Hai Fiona,
hope you are well and safe, I have gone through your IELTS writing task which is to improve our writing skills. It was amazing and too useful to understand. Could u please help me to improve my reading,listening,writing and speaking by giving homeworks? Because I am going to start my IELTS from the next week.
Best regards
Saranya
Hi Saranya. Many thanks for your comment. My homework system involves being a member of the Academy so it is easy to submit and mark,
Best wishes
Fiona
Hello Fiona
Your approach to ielts stands out.You give practical and evidence-based pathway to passing ielts exam.Apart from the exam,your pieces of advice have made ielts simpler and taken away my deepest ielts concerns/fear.
I would like to know whether there’s a package specifically for reading and writing. My current results: L-8 S-7.5 W-6.5 R-6.5 I’m desperate for at least a 7 in reading.
Kindly help me out.
Hi there Vitalis
I just emailed you but sometimes they go into junk so here’s my email:
Hi there
Thank you very much for your message. Wow – amazing results! With that kind of language you can easily get 7 in Reading. Writing is always a bit trickier – it’s possible some feedback would help you iron out the things that IELTS considers to be keeping you below 7.
You can get all of my courses individually (click ‘Courses’) in the menu
https://ieltsetc.com/courses/
If you join the Academy 3-month study programme in order to get the Writing lessons with feedback, I’m doing a 30% discount because there will be no feedback in August as I am doing an intensive course.
So you’ll get the 3 months’ access to all the courses, plus Writing Feedback in June and July.
Please let me know if you have any questions,
Best wishes
Fiona