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This lesson is NOT exactly about IELTS.
I wrote it to send to scammers who send me rude emails. (I give the bad examples first in the boxes before the good advice).
However, the advice is useful for General Training students who need to write emails for Task 1.
I have a more specific General Training email lesson with the language of polite requests.
By the end of this lesson, you will
(This person clearly knows my name from the name of my site, but chooses not to use it).
(‘Learn new things’ like WHAT for example? A ‘great article’ about what? Define ‘great’. 😒)
If you’re asking someone to help you and give up their time for you, but you have nothing to offer in return, you are unlikely to get a positive response.
I can’t write to Elon Musk and say ‘I find your cars amazing for saving the planet, therefore I want one’ and then expect him to send me a TESLA.
DO:
(😖 Best wishes? Best regards? Yours sincerely? Who are you, Barry?)
DON’T tell the reader what they should do next.
It is up to the reader to decide what they want to do next.
Try to see your email from the reader’s point of view, and don’t expect the reader to reply.
I expect that Elon Musk is a very busy man, and I don’t expect him to reply to my email asking for a TESLA.
So I cannot say ‘Write back soon’ or ‘Let me know what you think’. These are commands.
Nobody likes to be told what to do by someone they DON’T KNOW, and by someone who is asking for free HELP.
Say something like:
(🙈Hang on a minute – are they going to charge ME for publishing an article on my own site? What?)
Use full, grammatically correct sentences.
DON’T use informal language (see below where the writer drops the pronoun ‘I’).
DO use fixed, friendly expressions to close the letter:
(😱They know I’m busy but they don’t know my name?)
If someone hasn’t responded to your email it could be because:
You now have some options.
Which is the best option?
Obviously, you should ask yourself what was wrong with the first email (Option 3), and then do some research on how to write a more effective email.
In order to gain trust and be taken seriously, you need to include some or ALL of these details:
If you seriously want someone to help you, think seriously about what you have to offer in return.
The style and tone of your letter is crucial. It is a skill that is disappearing.
However, as you can see from my tips above, it is NOT difficult to make simple changes that show your respect for the reader’s time and situation.
Even if they just quickly respond to say they are not interested, it shows that your email has been taken seriously and that you can keep working towards your goals and improving your offering so that one day soon you will get a positive response.
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Dear Fiona,
Thank you so much for your useful guidance in this content. To illustrate the content, you used some cases which were straight but clear and helpful. Honestly, I appreciate your support with learners.
Thank you again and best wishes for you,
Tammy
Hi Tammy
Thanks ever so much for your comment and I’m glad you found the blog helpful,
Best wishes
Fiona
Hi Fiona,
Yes, absolutely thank you so much for clarification.
Best wishes
Riya
Hello Fiona,
Thanks for your amazing effort! This website is what totally anyone who appears for IELTS would need.! Need some clarification, If we are writing to a person whom we don’t know I learnt as it would be a formal letter and we should start with Dear Sir/Madam. So I am confused now which to follow as you have mentioned to start with Dear ‘name’…Please clarify if my understanding is incorrect.
Many thanks in advance.
Best wishes
Riya
Hi Riya. This is a great question. It just totally depends on the question. If you don’t know the person, definitely write Dear Sir/Madam. But if you’re writing to your boss, for example, you need to use a name (Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones), as you probably know the name of your boss. Does that answer your question?
Best wishes
Fiona
Hello Fiona
You alweys post a great and very helpful content.
Thank you for sharing
James
Thank you James. I’m really glad you find my content helpful.
Best wishes
Fiona