IELTS Writing Feedback: keywords to improve your Task 2 essays

IELTS Writing Feedback: Negative words

anecdotal – anecdotal information is not based on facts or careful study. It is based on things that you saw or heard rather than on proven facts. Academic language is scientific and needs to be based on facts.

confusing – this is when your arguments or logic don’t make sense and the reader is confused by them. This could also be due to over-complex language.

emotional/emotive – expressing your feelings rather than being neutrally descriptive. You should avoid using any emotional language or language that is meant to cause an emotional reaction e.g wonderful, magical, terrible, amazing.

exaggerated – don’t represent something as being larger, better or worse than it is in reality. Exaggeration (synonym hyperbole) loses trust.

‘flowery‘ – this is a word I use in feedback to describe non-academic words, expressions and thoughts e.g. ‘Children are a wonderful blessing from God’.

general/generalised – see the point above about being specific. Avoid sweeping generalisations and stereotypes e.g. Most women prefer to look after children. BUT when you’re giving examples, it’s better to talk about general trends than personal, anecdotal examples. e.g. Women have traditionally taken the role of housekeeper is better than ‘All the women I know stay home and look after the children’.

mechanical – following a fixed template or pattern without thinking about what you’re doing or saying, like a robot. Avoid using linking words mechanically e.g. don’t put words like ‘Moreover’ ‘Besides’ ‘Therefore’ at the start of each sentence. Use other forms of cohesion.

memorised – All language is memorised, but examiners can see if you have memorised whole paragraphs and therefore not using your own language. However, it is perfectly acceptable (and recommended) to use memorised ‘chunks’ of language such as collocations e.g. ‘This has had an adverse effect on …’

rambling – long and confusing/confused, tending to digress (depart from the main point), or cover a wide range of subjects. Lacking in focus and structure. illogical, incoherent.

repetitive (noun repetition) – saying the same thing in different ways but not developing your points. Or using the same word/idea/argument too often.

subjective (opposite of objective) – if your views are subjective, they are influenced by your personal feelings, experiences or beliefs rather than looking at the issue from a more neutral, unbiased, factual position.

vague – the opposite of precise and specific. Unfocused and imprecise language or examples make your message unclear, unreliable, or unconvincing. You need to clearly state, express or describe your point of view and be precise in your choice of examples.

IELTS Writing Feedback: academic writing terms

collocation – learning ‘chunks’ of language (short phrases) will reduce the burden of trying to find the right word or expression in the Writing Test. Examples include ‘have a detrimental effect on’ or ‘tackle a problem’ (see a list of useful collocations in this essay: ‘How to talk about cause and effect’.

concession – In order to discuss an issue in a balanced way, you may need to concede (admit or agree that something is true even though it doesn’t support your argument). Learn how to show concession in IELTS Task 2 and the language you need to concede (e.g. although, even though, despite).

convention – different countries and cultures have different writing conventions (ways of writing that are considered usual and correct and that are widely accepted and followed). The convention that you have been taught at school may be different from what is expected in the IELTS test, so you need to become familiar with IELTS-writing conventions by reading models from trustworthy (reliable) sources.

counterargument – when you write an Task 2 essay, you make an argument and explain why your argument is valid. When you counterargue, you show awareness of a possible argument AGAINST your argument. This can be very persuasive, as it shows that you have weighed up the alternatives and that you are so confident of your argument that you can dismiss other arguments. It shows that you can deal with any objections to your argument.

critical thinking – this is a huge subject area which I can only cover very briefly here. Critical thinking involves gathering information, evaluating information, drawing conclusions and evaluating those conclusions. It is important to show that you can think critically about the Task 2 question by, for example, questioning it and avoiding oversimplification. Get a more in-depth analysis of critical thinking strategies here.

essay types – there is a lot of information online about what ‘type’ of essay you should write (‘argument’ ‘opinion’ ‘discursive’ ‘expository’ ‘persuasive’ ‘analytical’ ’cause and effect’ ‘problem and solution’ ‘advantages and disadvantages’ ‘process’ ‘synthesis’ ‘theory-evidence’ etc). Although there are different types of questions, I argue that there is only ONE type of essay for IELTS, and I call it an OPINION essay. This simply means an essay where you discuss the issue in a balanced way, and give your opinion. Pauline Cullen calls this a ‘DISCURSIVE’ essay. Learn more about IELTS Task 2 structures here.

extent – ‘To what extent do you agree?’ This question is simply asking you to discuss the issue and give your opinion, like any other Task 2 question. See more in my lesson here: ‘How to answer to what extent do you agree or disagree?’

functions – every sentence in your essay has a function e.g. to explain, to exemplify (give an example), to criticise, to show the other point of view, to predict, to contradict, to refute, to show concession etc). You have to be clear about the function of each sentence, and use the appropriate language to express that function as well as the correct linking word to introduce it (e.g. if, therefore, which means that, namely).

hedging – in order to avoid stereotypes and generalisations, it is really important that you learn how hedging works and how to hedge (use more cautious language). Find my full lesson about How to use hedging language.

stance (standpoint) a particular way of thinking about something (synonym opinion, position). Where do you stand on this topic? (‘what is your stance?’ = ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree?’). You need to make your stance clear and present a clear position, even if they ask you to show both sides. You MUST say which side you favour. Make sure you show this in the introduction so that your ‘position is clear throughout’ (Band 7).

message – your message is like your stance, viewpoint or opinion. It needs to be easy to follow. The examiner should not have to read carefully to find your message hidden somewhere within a paragraph.

PEEL paragraphs – ‘PEEL’ stands for Point-Explanation-Example-Link, and this structure ensures that you make your point clearly, explain it, support it with evidence and then link back to the question (I call this final Link the ‘So what’? sentence – it helps you remind the reader why your point is relevant to the question). Learn more about PEEL paragraphs here.

templates essays – template Task 2 essays are essay outlines that you can adapt depending on the question. When you’re preparing for IELTS, these can be useful if you use them as models to help you learn about paragraph structures, but you should never memorise them or try to use them in the test. Your essay will look and sound very unnatural if you simply use a template and change certain words according to the question.

thesis statement – when you’re writing a dissertation at university, you have to summarise your argument in a ‘thesis statement‘ in the introduction to show the reader what you will argue or try to prove in your essay and how you will do this (like a road map). In IELTS essays, where you are limited to around 250-280 words, you do not need to give a thesis statement. However you need to write your opinion clearly in the introduction. So I DO recommend that you write a thesis statement such as ‘In this essay I will argue….’ or ‘This essay will argue in favour/against…’. OR simply by saying ‘I agree/disagree with (the issue) and I will outline my reasons below’.

Most common problems in IELTS Writing Feedback

Here are the problems teachers often encounter when giving IELTS Writing Feedback:

• going off-topic
• irrelevant information
• claims are not supported
• representing opinions as facts
• insufficient evidence
• unclear argument/reasoning
• insufficient depth
• arguments not extended/developed
• superficial coverage of the subject
• poor organisation
• opinion not clear
• message was difficult to follow