Are you stuck at Band 6.5 in your IELTS Writing and not sure why?
Perhaps you’ve used an online IELTS Writing Feedback Service before but you still can’t see what you’re doing wrong.
If you don’t have a teacher who has experience in marking IELTS Writing, it is difficult to understand why you keep getting the same score.
There could be a number of reasons, and I am confident that I can identify the reason very quickly.
Abdul was getting Band 8 in all skills except Writing, but in order to qualify to teach English in Germany, he needed at least Band 7 in Writing.
I was able to tell him specifically why he was not getting Band 7 and he was able to make the necessary changes to secure him a band 7.5 in the following test.
In the video and document that I create for you, you will get
- detailed and accurate video feedback with written comments
- a score for each of the 4 Band criteria (with an explanation of why I chose each score)
- detailed correction of grammar, spelling and punctuation
- links to further recommended practice in the Members Academy*
- personalized action points for success
- a model essay and analysis to compare
You will also
- learn about key areas you need to fix
- understand the reasons why you need to fix them
- have a clear and understandable explanation of an examiner’s way of thinking
How to get my IELTS Writing Feedback
In order to get my IELTS writing feedback, you need to become a member of the Members Academy.
Why?
Because I have hundreds of ready-made lessons in the Academy that you can access to get extra practice for every action point that I give you.
This will help you save time, money and effort by focusing your learning only on the areas that you need to develop.
If you only want to focus on Writing, I recommend that you start with my Task 1 and Task 2 Course Package.
This includes:
- Writing Task 1 course
- Writing Task 2 course
- Writing Masterclass mini-course (8 intensive lessons)
- Private Blog (100+ mini lessons)
- Daily tips
- Monthly live sessions
- Private community and access to me
When you have completed the course, you’ll be able to upgrade to the IELTS Writing Feedback and Assessment package, which is currently $299 (2023).
What’s included in the Writing Feedback Package?
As well as all of the bonuses listed above, you will also get access to 150+ Members Academy webinars.
Each webinar includes
- video recording of a Members Academy feedback session
- examiner’s feedback on individual essays
- common mistakes and how to fix them
- model answers
- links to private blog tips
- links to vocabulary enhancement articles
Sample IELTS Writing Feedback
In the short video below, you’ll see how I quickly identified 3 main reasons why Abdul could not get Band 7.
This was NOT a full feedback session, but it was enough for Abdul to go and spend some time developing specific areas of his Writing that were stopping him from getting Band 7.
Why can’t I just buy feedback?
There are many online tutors who will be happy to sell you just writing feedback.
But these days you can get a robot to do that for free e.g ChatGPT.
I know for a fact that many big companies are selling IELTS Writing Feedback but using AI (Artificial Intelligence) to mark them.
The problem with AI is that it doesn’t understand the IELTS Band Criteria. So although it can give you feedback on vocabulary and grammar, you need a qualified and experienced IELTS specialist to give you the kind of feedback that will change your score.
Many studies have shown that feedback alone will NOT improve your writing, especially if you just get one or two assessments.
My Writing Feedback and Assessment Package is developmental (I track your progress) and it is designed to change the way you write specifically for IELTS.
You will get EIGHT full assessments (4 x Task 1 and 4 x Task 2) that are carefully structured to develop your overall skills, using the materials in the Academy for extra support and guidance.
About me
I’m Fiona, an IELTS coach with over 30 years of teaching experience.
I help students get their best IELTS score in a less stressful and more enjoyable way.
I have put all of my knowledge, skills, materials and training into the Members Academy, and it has helped hundreds of learners get the score they need to move on in their busy lives.
Hello Fiona,
I was not able to find a button where I can pay for this service.
Can you please help me?
Thank you and kind regards,
Hi Jessica,
Sorry about that! I changed the link, so I’ll email you now,
Best wishes and thank you for your interest,
Fiona