Writing Feedback Service

Do you want to know what an IELTS examiner is really thinking when they mark your writing?

Then my feedback video is just what you need.

I will send you a Writing Task to complete and when you return it to me, I will create a video and send it to you to watch as many times as you like.

In your personalized video, I will

analyse the question I provided, summarising what you need to do to complete the task
go through your response exactly as an examiner would, giving feedback on the 4 criteria – Task Achievement, Lexical Resource, Coherence & Cohesion and Grammatical Accuracy
point out positive areas and refer to the band descriptors for each criteria
give a detailed analysis of grammatical and spelling mistakes
make clear suggestions on how you could improve your writing
compare your writing with a model task.

This service is heavily discounted in the Members Academy ($10 per task) where I keep a shared record of your progress and refer you to the Units you need to complete to make the necessary improvements.

How can this video help improve your writing?

Well, maybe you didn’t answer the question. Perhaps you answered the question but didn’t use paragraphs. It’s possible you used paragraphs but didn’t write enough words. Or did you write enough words but not enough data?

Who knows? And how will you ever know if no-one tells you?

I’ll tell you EVERYTHING you need to know – what to keep doing, and what to stop doing. This will save you a lot of time and money.

Remember, in this video that I create especially for you, you will get

detailed and accurate feedback on your writing
personalized action points for success
a video recording lasting 10 – 15 minutes
a model essay and detailed analysis to compare

You will also

learn about key areas you need to fix
understand the reasons why you need to fix them
have a clear and understandable explanation of an examiner’s way of thinking

AND you can watch it as many times as you like and THEN ask me questions if you’re not sure!

You will get the criteria from the Band Descriptors for either Task 1 or Task 2, and this will help you work towards the score you need.

All of this for just $30.

OR

$50 for 2 Tasks.

And the process couldn’t be simpler. Just email me your essay (you can scan it, take a photo, or type it if you prefer) and I will get back to you within 24 hours.